Highly conflicted characters keep us reading.
Fiction. Storytelling. Theater. Make-believe.
Maybe it seems like a safe way to come to terms with our highly conflicted selves.
When dishonesty or a shallow eye writes characters that fall
flat, we feel bored or betrayed.
Bored because they arenāt alive.
Betrayed because they arenāt like us.
A characterās struggles must be as much as internal as external. Donāt just face the hero with hard things. Face him with the one thing he fears most in order to save someone else. Make her deepest-held fears wrestle with her deepest-held ideals. Hold up the two virtues a character values most and offer an “either or.”
In their weakness, they are strong. The strong know how to
be vulnerable.
Why do we know this, deep down?
Minor characters can be flat, and we donāt notice. But major characters need inner battles or we disconnect.
Mr. Darcy. Jean Valjean. Margaret Hale.
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And then thereās the kid with no name.
I donāt know if Iād call his an inner conflict. But there are things that donāt seem to belong together.
Heās one of the most interesting characters Iāve met.
I met him in a book called Milkweed by Jerry Spinelli. I picked up the audiobook for one dollar. The library was getting rid of it. Presumably because itās a childrenās book about a Polish Gypsy boy who wants to be a Nazi. (I assume some parents complained.) And, as it happens, the boyās best friends are Jews. So obviously, thereās going to be some kind of inner struggle, sooner or later. Even if it comes as one decisive blow.
āThis is crazy,ā I thought when I read the back cover. It got crazier.
The kid knows nothing. No one taught him to fear. No one taught him to hate. No one taught him who he is. When the book opens, he only knows one thingāhow to survive. Seriously, he doesnāt even know his own name.
We meet a puzzle.
Innocent, naĆÆve, and a lawbreaker, a thief.
Who is he really? What are we to make of him?
He sees the marching and wants to be a Nazi.
Then, āWhatās an angel?ā he asks.
Wow.
This book is not for the faint of heart. But I donāt think you are, if you read this far.